Comment on 小白船 (朝鲜童谣 반달 半月) with my creative English and revised Esperanto lyrics

With my creative English and Esperanto poetical lyrics as a comment, I'd like to invite our YT friends for a deeper understanding of this Korean children's ballad by means of an interlinguistic comparison along with the multilingual contrast including Korean and Chinese lyrics.
(乔毅 Qiao Yi / Intercultural Studio: 3:30 →)

☆ The Little White Boat (English poetical lyrics by Qiao Yi)

In the blue sky of the milky way,
There is a little white boat.
On the boat there is an osmanthus tree,
And the little rabbit is playing.
The oars of the boat are invisible,
And there is no sail either,
The little white boat is floating off into the clouds.

Crossing the milky way it comes to the cloud land,
Where is its destination beyond the cloud land?
In the remote western heaven far away,
With golden light the morning stars are just like beacons,
Shining brightly.

☆ La eta blanka boato (revised version 06.04.2022)

En la lakta vojo de la blua ĉielo,
Estas la eta blanka boato kun helo.
Sur la boato staras la arbo osmanta,
Ludumas la blanka kuniklo malgranda.

De la remiloj estas neniu apero,
Sur la boato mankas veloj je vento;
La blanka boato flosas al okcidento.

Tra la lakta vojo de la ĉielo,
Oni atingas al la buntnuba lando.
Kaj kie estas la plua celo
Preter la buntnuba lando?

En la fora okcidenta ĉielo,
Orkolore lumas la matena stelo.
Al la lumturo similas,
La stelo hele brilas.

《小白船》Esperantigis Yi Qiao

☆ 《반달 半月》尹克荣（윤극영，1924年作词、作曲）

푸른하늘 은~하수 하얀 쪽배엔
계수나무 한~나무 토끼 한마리 돛대도 아니달고
삿대도 없이 가기도 잘도간다 서~쪽나라로
은하수를 건~너서 구름나라로 구름나라 지나서
어디로 가나 멀리서 반짝 반짝 비치이는
건 샛별이 등대란다 길~을찾아라

☆ 《小白船》（金哲南 김철남，1950年中文翻译）

蓝蓝的天空银河里
有只小白船
船上有棵桂花树
白兔在游玩
桨儿桨儿看不见
船上也没帆
飘呀飘呀飘向西天

渡过那条银河水
走向云彩国
走过那个云彩国
再向哪儿去
在那遥远的地方
闪着金光
晨星是灯塔
照呀照得亮

Uploading with Chinese and revised English subtitles in memory of my dear elder aunt and uncle.
以此梦之旅合唱组合深情演唱的经典名曲缅怀我亲爱的大姨和大姨父。
Das helle Schiffchen: ein berühmtes Kinderlied und buddhistischer Gesang zugleich.

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