IELTS Writing Task 2: Example Task + Essay Planning + Examiner's Notes

IELTS Writing Task 2: Example Task + Essay Planning + Examiner's Notes
Q. The use of phones, tablets and other devices when people are walking in public is causing concern among many commentators. What dangers may arise when people focus on such devices when walking in the street? How could these problems be reduced?
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This is an Ideas (Problem/solution) type Task.

The instructions may sometimes include synonyms for ‘problems’ such as ‘dangers, risks, drawbacks’ and synonyms for ‘solutions’ including ‘answers, remedies, ways to solve/reduce.’
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Student’s Plan:

Essay type: Ideas (Problems/solutions)

Intro: Devices are universal; 2 problems, 2 solutions

Problems:
1 Accidents, eg people, cars, traffic
2 Anti-social & rude

Solutions:
1 Education about dangers, eg in colleges, advertising
2 put warning systems on phones, like on cars

Summary: Physical & social dangers; education & warning for solutions
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Examiner's Notes!


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