IELTS Writing Task 1
IELTS Writing Task 1 with Step by Step Explanation!
Model Task 1 question, Model Essay and Examiner’s Comment!
You should spend about 20 minutes on this Task.
Q. Charts 1 and 2 below show the proportion of income spent on different areas by young people in Canada and Poland. Chart 3 shows the average age of certain life events for these countries, and an estimated global average age.
Write a report summarising the information. Select and describe the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
***
-This Task is more complex than it might appear at first, because the ‘life events’ data could be grouped in a number of different ways. This candidate achieves Band 9 by taking a logical grouping and explaining it clearly.
-The summary uses some very strong vocabulary (“more evenly split than…take the vast majority”) which is academic but still clear. Elsewhere, the signposting is well chosen (“Looking firstly at… however/ regarding/ whereas/ by contrast”) and the candidate shows that she can use words to qualify proportions (“roughly similar/ almost half/ much earlier/ much later/ more evenly.”)
***
Any questions or feedbacks?
#ielts #ieltswritingtask1 #ieltswritingtask1academic #ieltswritingvocabulary #ieltspreparation #ieltswritingpracticetestwithanswers #ieltspreperation #ieltsvocabulary #ieltswritingpracticetestwithanswers #writing #academicwriting
Видео IELTS Writing Task 1 канала IELTSWithMe
Model Task 1 question, Model Essay and Examiner’s Comment!
You should spend about 20 minutes on this Task.
Q. Charts 1 and 2 below show the proportion of income spent on different areas by young people in Canada and Poland. Chart 3 shows the average age of certain life events for these countries, and an estimated global average age.
Write a report summarising the information. Select and describe the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
***
-This Task is more complex than it might appear at first, because the ‘life events’ data could be grouped in a number of different ways. This candidate achieves Band 9 by taking a logical grouping and explaining it clearly.
-The summary uses some very strong vocabulary (“more evenly split than…take the vast majority”) which is academic but still clear. Elsewhere, the signposting is well chosen (“Looking firstly at… however/ regarding/ whereas/ by contrast”) and the candidate shows that she can use words to qualify proportions (“roughly similar/ almost half/ much earlier/ much later/ more evenly.”)
***
Any questions or feedbacks?
#ielts #ieltswritingtask1 #ieltswritingtask1academic #ieltswritingvocabulary #ieltspreparation #ieltswritingpracticetestwithanswers #ieltspreperation #ieltsvocabulary #ieltswritingpracticetestwithanswers #writing #academicwriting
Видео IELTS Writing Task 1 канала IELTSWithMe
Комментарии отсутствуют
Информация о видео
9 февраля 2025 г. 0:00:06
00:11:35
Другие видео канала



















