Line Editing 101

Hello! I'm finally back and with the final video in my series on prose where we put everything together, ft. writing I wrote seven years ago. It's painfully bad (my first novel is officially the worst thing ever written in history), but we make it a little better. A little. It's still not good. Actually, it's still pretty bad.

Also, a note: I realize that I forgot to apply one of the most important prose tips I mentioned in a previous video, cutting 'to be' verbs. I'm really sorry I missed this since it's a great tip, but I'd suggest reading up on it by yourself since it makes a huge difference. With so many issues in the samples, I still missed a lot.

Outro music: The Wasp by David Stone

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