Riff review: keeper or crap?

I turned this into a song demo in a sort of hardcore style called "Smash 'em All."

Check it out here: https://youtu.be/xpYyZM8n1CQ?si=A0ePDPVjhyDrLKmN

I'd kill for some feedback on the song, good or bad!

Видео Riff review: keeper or crap? канала Open 6