READING MY UC ESSAYS | Accepted into UCLA, UC Davis, and UC San Diego

In this video, I'll be reading my University of California Essays, providing some advice/feedback from each essay, and sharing some tips that I found to be very helpful!

The college search is always stressful, and if you're watching this, you're probably trying to find some sort of guidance and/or direction in regards to conjuring up your college essays (I know because I was here sifting through YouTube too). I hope this video provides you with the inspiration you're looking for and alleviates some of that college-search stress!!

I applied to 4 out of the 10 University of California Schools: UCLA, UC Berkeley, UC Davis, and UC San Diego. I was accepted into UCLA, UC Davis, and UC San Diego, but I was sadly not accepted into UC Berkeley.

TO HELP YOU OUT:
Essay 1 - 1:02
Essay 2 - 3:20
Essay 3 - 5:28
Essay 4 - 7:53
Some Tips - 10:37

Essay 1: Describe an example of your leadership experience in which you have positively influenced others, helped resolve disputes or contributed to group efforts over time.

Essay 2: Every person has a creative side, and it can be expressed in many ways: problem solving, original and innovative thinking, and artistically, to name a few. Describe how you express your creative side.

Essay 3: Think about an academic subject that inspires you. Describe how you have furthered this interest inside and/or outside of the classroom.

Essay 4: Beyond what has already been shared in your application, what do you believe makes you stand out as a strong candidate for admissions to the University of California?

ABOUT ME:
Aloha, I'm Hiʻi, and I'm an incoming First-Year at Brown. I'm also a health-conscious and adventurous island nerd who makes videos about health-conscious and adventurous island nerd sorts of things :)

Instagram: @aloha.hiilei

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