Editing Tips for Underwriters | When Your Book Is Too Short
What do you do if your novel is too short? How do you add more to a book? You're done with NaNo and you have 50K--but you need 30K more. I'm sharing tips for what to do if you are an underwriter/lean drafter.
Sorry for how long this one is... I tried to include examples, but also ultimately it's hard to discuss structure without getting too deep into structure!
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Tips for Overwriters: https://youtu.be/7ambrQGtxuI
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White Room Syndrome & How To Fix It: https://youtu.be/6RnMSC8U4Qk
Must Know Thriller Beats: https://youtu.be/ymjt75htlAw
TIMESTAMPS
00:00 Introduction
01:46 Internalization/emotionality
03:37 All A Plot, Lacking B Plot?
07:09 Underutilized Characters
12:17 Complicating Characters
14:43 Skipping "Boring" Scenes
17:20 Lacking Description
21:11 Starting in the Wrong Place
23:07 Act 2 Light On Setbacks
25:46 Rushed Midpoint to Climax
26:44 Ending is Rushed
27:44 What is Confusing?
30:25 Narration Overabundance
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Mic: Rode VideoMic Go Light
Lighting: Limo Studio Soft Kit
Editing Software: Pinnacle Studio 22
Видео Editing Tips for Underwriters | When Your Book Is Too Short канала Alexa Donne
Sorry for how long this one is... I tried to include examples, but also ultimately it's hard to discuss structure without getting too deep into structure!
RELATED VIDEOS
Tips for Overwriters: https://youtu.be/7ambrQGtxuI
Narrate vs. Dramatize: https://youtu.be/RiA6t7MOYVs
White Room Syndrome & How To Fix It: https://youtu.be/6RnMSC8U4Qk
Must Know Thriller Beats: https://youtu.be/ymjt75htlAw
TIMESTAMPS
00:00 Introduction
01:46 Internalization/emotionality
03:37 All A Plot, Lacking B Plot?
07:09 Underutilized Characters
12:17 Complicating Characters
14:43 Skipping "Boring" Scenes
17:20 Lacking Description
21:11 Starting in the Wrong Place
23:07 Act 2 Light On Setbacks
25:46 Rushed Midpoint to Climax
26:44 Ending is Rushed
27:44 What is Confusing?
30:25 Narration Overabundance
Preorder The Ivies from your favorite book retailer!: https://bit.ly/3mkxyYj
Add The Ivies on Goodreads! https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/48896122-the-ivies
+BUY MY BOOKS+
Buy The Stars We Steal from Book Depository (ships worldwide!): https://www.bookdepository.com/Stars-We-Steal-Alexa-Donne/9781328948946?ref=grid-view&qid=1603728315664&sr=1-3
Buy Brightly Burning from Book Depository (ships worldwide!): https://www.bookdepository.com/Brightly-Burning-Alexa-Donne/9781785659423
Buy BRIGHTLY BURNING on Amazon: https://www.amazon.com/Brightly-Burning-Alexa-Donne/dp/1328948935/ref=tmm_hrd_swatch_0?_encoding=UTF8&qid=1500334638&sr=1-1
Get Brightly Burning on Audible.com! https://www.audible.com/pd/Brightly-Burning-Audiobook/B07H41CPVC?asin=B07H41CPVC&source_code=AUDOR2220912189OII
+LINKS+
Goodreads:
https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/35065031-brightly-burning
Twitter:
https://twitter.com/alexadonne
Instagram:
https://www.instagram.com/alexadonne/
Newsletter Sign-Up:
http://alexadonne.com/newsletter/
Website:
http://alexadonne.com/
Wattpad:
https://www.wattpad.com/user/alexadonne
+FILMING SPECS+
Camera: Canon t6i
Mic: Rode VideoMic Go Light
Lighting: Limo Studio Soft Kit
Editing Software: Pinnacle Studio 22
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