1st page critiques LIVE STREAM

I'm critiquing first pages LIVE! I'll share my screen so you can see line edits, and talk about writing craft.
TIMESTAMPS
00:00 Introduction
02:59 Adult Romance critique "The Ones We Left Behind"
20:34 YA fantasy critique "Winter Peaks"
37:47 YA queer romcom "Callum At Last"
51:28 YA fantasy romance "City of Colors and Stars"
1:08:01 YA thriller "Death Becomes Him"
1:26:45 Adult Domestic thriller "Save Me"
1:41:04 YA thriller "When All Is Lost"
1:55:16 YA fantasy "An Offering of Blood and Stone"
2:07:56 MG spooky mystery "Wunder Cemetary"
2:20:53 Q&A

Rhylee K Jones (When All Is Lost) YouTube channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCkmKSZE5boWuXucGKwpoa2g

Becca Day (Save Me) YouTube Channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC-CgItV_M6EI5zwBFsp1VrQ?

Видео 1st page critiques LIVE STREAM канала Alexa Donne