How NOT to Sit on a Dragon Egg (Vore Animation FAIL) - Read Description

I think a big part of learning to animate is to embrace one's mistakes. I took a LONG time rendering this one, only to realize it turned out TERRIBLE. Here is a list of my thoughts about this animation:

First, the FPS of 25 was not taken enough into account. I make the mistake of rushing my frames and putting the keys too close together, hence why everything is so fast.

Second, I am using a single camera and have not yet learned about how to toggle between them.

Third, there was supposed to be an EGG in this render. A SECOND egg that was supposed to come out of the dragon! That was accidentally toggled off.

Fourth, the inside of the dragon is blue. Might be a lighting issue. What was up with the janky camera movement in the intestines???

Fifth, I had a hard time moving both the dragon and dog at the same time.

FINALLY..... here are the positives.

The throat and belly shape keys were done nicely, but again I really need to slow down with them. I am happy with the recolour I did and the lighting isn't terrible due to the sky texture in the world. The dog sitting on the egg is somewhat smooth and there is no clipping that I could see.

This is the end of my self-critique.

I will remake this animation in the future and use this as a reference of what not to do and someday see how far I have come.

I believe in sharing one's learning process with others so that feedback can help me learn more.

Either way, thanks for watching and reading! I'll do better next time!

If you have any thoughts, feel free to share.

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