Flowershy - Original Animatic Story ( PART 1/? )

I'm not pretty good at animatic or editing it, but I need a start somewhere and since that I have the chance to share it with a lot of you, I take all the criticism ( constructive plz ).

This is the song I use : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1nD3Sp_saz4&t=69s

You can ask me any kind of question as long as it is on Flowershy.
And yes, fan arts are fine ~

My friend Lovely Pony helped me finding out the idea of the garden and the tree-ponies ~

( Don't re-do this video plz )

Видео Flowershy - Original Animatic Story ( PART 1/? ) канала Emala Jiss - Discontinued Channel