Soldier, Poet, King Meme - OC (wip)

Yo! So I actually made an animation?? (well I guess its more of an animatic at the moment, but whatever). which I've never done before. I've been working on it for awhile though, so I hope its alright.

I'll probably change quite a few things for the finished version. For one thing it sure ain't gonna be grey-scale. For another, I kinda messed up Stag and Jagged's ages in the flashback bits so that'll probably change. I might also change the timing of Star's flashback but idk.
(Also, oh godd some of the quality really has been murdered on parts of this. Flash is the worst.)
I'm planning on making other memes. As I really want to make a 'Can't sleep love' meme with a different set of ocs. So that'll probably be a thing before I even finish this, haha.

Oh also, any constructive criticism is really appreciated! I've never made a meme before let alone an animation this long. So I honestly don't know what I'm doing.

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Drawn in - Firealpaca

Animated in - Flash pro CS6

My Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/chloartscrows/

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Sooo, to give a little context since this is probably quite hard to follow.
The characters in this meme are human versions of a couple of my Warrior cats ocs. in order of appearance they are:

Stag(paw) - Lil ball of energy who just wants to be happy. He doesn't actually remember getting thrown off a cliff because of ~trauma amnesia~

Jagged(ear) - Grumpy Idiot with a mysterious past. Seriously he just showed up one day, covered in blood mind you, and surprised Fern(whisker) half to death. (Side-note: Jagged's also Stag's mentor.)

Star - Literal Ray of Sunshine, who took one look at their hellscape of a new world and decided to make it better (and succeeded). Also in doing so they practically single highhandedly founded a society that lasted centuries? thought I'd mention that little detail.

The live in my own fanclans who, in turn, live on an island in a post-apocalyptic world. (Its an "80% of the world in uninhabitable because of chemical warfare" kind of apocalypse). in Stag's and Jagged's case its been several hundred years since said apocalypse, but Star lived right as/after it happened.

Also! If anyone has any questions about them I'd be happy to answer!

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Credits:

Music -
"Soldier, Poet, King" by the Oh Hellos: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MzVKsltzYdI
Original Meme by GothFrog:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pjw3u9AZE1E
Meme that inspired me -
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cUkXu5-Otak

Видео Soldier, Poet, King Meme - OC (wip) канала ChloArts