WORST FASHION ILLUSTRATION BEGINNER, It's my first time!

My Fashion Design Illustration beginner video. The turn out was really bad, but for a first attempt, what were you expecting? I used Fine color sketch markers, watch till the end to see what happened to make it so bad. Hahaha.

If you happen to make a dress similar to this style, please tag source. Thank you
The first part of the video which involves sketching wasn't so clear that's why I didn't upload it.
I am still an amateur at this, so let me hear your constructive criticisms.
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AngloZulu - The Dark Contenent by Kevin MacLeod is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution license (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/)
Source: http://incompetech.com/music/royalty-free/index.html?isrc=USUAN1100411
Artist: http://incompetech.com/

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