What Does UCLA Really Think of My Essays?

I have been saving this feedback on my personal insight question essay for almost a year now because I was too scared to look at it 😓But I decided that there is no time like the present so I finally read the feedback in this video. I figured that hearing advice straight from an admissions officer could shed some light on what UC expects in your essays. Please let me know your thoughts on this video and whether you found this information useful/beneficial.

About Me
-Name: Hailey Dollar (yes, that's my real last name)
-Age: 21
-School: UCLA
-Major: Applied Linguistics with a minor in Cognitive Science
-Fun fact: I love astrology! I am an aquarius sun sign with moon in aries and rising in sagittarius.

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Disclaimer: I am NOT affiliated in any way with the University of California, California Community College or California State University, or the admissions departments of these institutions. The information presented in this video is taken from my own personal experience.

Видео What Does UCLA Really Think of My Essays? канала Hailey Dollar