"The McDonalds Addiction" by The Shadow Reader (McDonalds Creepypasta)
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What my Youtube channel was created for, was originally to narrate Lost Episode Creepypastas and the like. Why would I do that? Well to be honest with all of you, I feel as though the "Lost Episode" genera of Creepypastas seems to be a subject that nobody else would really cover..so I decided to dedicate my channel to nearly forgotten subject. However, as the years went by, I've vehemently decided to start reviewing the stories that I narrate, in order to help future writers of all sorts learn from their mistakes, and strive to do better.
Now, please understand one major thing...and hear me out on this good. I DO NOT criticize stories just for the sake of being a jerk to others. While I certainly can get rather annoyed, and a bit angry, at the constant usage of cliches and bad grammar in a storyline, I only do it for the sake of the author, and out of love for all my fellow Creepypasta writers.
With that said though, I've decided against ranting as much as I have done in the past, and instead focus on breaking down the story paragraph by paragraph to point out the storyline, plot development, proper description,, the grammar, any and all cliches, and lastly the punctuation marks...ect.
Music provided by Free Music Tunes
Track: AVIIRA - Tyranny
Link: https://youtu.be/nIjhIHNLGlc
Link to the Various Music Artist and Works that I use in my videos:
Myuu: https://www.youtube.com/user/myuuji
Kevin McLeod: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-SjOkb3kVgI&list=PLAd3NF1qMjHPRKQLa8fOB4fztKJm9CV3w
Lucas King: https://www.youtube.com/user/LucasKingPiano
(Please Note that most stories on this channel are written by Anonymous People on the internet, and will be labeled that way unless specified otherwise)
Most of the Creepypastas that I do get on this website are from the Wayback machine. However, due to Creepypasta Wiki moving over to Fandom.com, those links are pretty much gone, but I have saved the archived links for anyone who's interested in checking these stories out.
https://web.archive.org/web/20140320055347/http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Category:%22Lost_Episodes%22
Hope you all have a great day!
#TheShadowReader #Creepypastas #LiteraryCriticism #Liturature #English #Grammer #LostEpisodes #TheBackyardigans
Видео "The McDonalds Addiction" by The Shadow Reader (McDonalds Creepypasta) канала The Shadow Reader
What my Youtube channel was created for, was originally to narrate Lost Episode Creepypastas and the like. Why would I do that? Well to be honest with all of you, I feel as though the "Lost Episode" genera of Creepypastas seems to be a subject that nobody else would really cover..so I decided to dedicate my channel to nearly forgotten subject. However, as the years went by, I've vehemently decided to start reviewing the stories that I narrate, in order to help future writers of all sorts learn from their mistakes, and strive to do better.
Now, please understand one major thing...and hear me out on this good. I DO NOT criticize stories just for the sake of being a jerk to others. While I certainly can get rather annoyed, and a bit angry, at the constant usage of cliches and bad grammar in a storyline, I only do it for the sake of the author, and out of love for all my fellow Creepypasta writers.
With that said though, I've decided against ranting as much as I have done in the past, and instead focus on breaking down the story paragraph by paragraph to point out the storyline, plot development, proper description,, the grammar, any and all cliches, and lastly the punctuation marks...ect.
Music provided by Free Music Tunes
Track: AVIIRA - Tyranny
Link: https://youtu.be/nIjhIHNLGlc
Link to the Various Music Artist and Works that I use in my videos:
Myuu: https://www.youtube.com/user/myuuji
Kevin McLeod: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-SjOkb3kVgI&list=PLAd3NF1qMjHPRKQLa8fOB4fztKJm9CV3w
Lucas King: https://www.youtube.com/user/LucasKingPiano
(Please Note that most stories on this channel are written by Anonymous People on the internet, and will be labeled that way unless specified otherwise)
Most of the Creepypastas that I do get on this website are from the Wayback machine. However, due to Creepypasta Wiki moving over to Fandom.com, those links are pretty much gone, but I have saved the archived links for anyone who's interested in checking these stories out.
https://web.archive.org/web/20140320055347/http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Category:%22Lost_Episodes%22
Hope you all have a great day!
#TheShadowReader #Creepypastas #LiteraryCriticism #Liturature #English #Grammer #LostEpisodes #TheBackyardigans
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