6 Common App Essay Mistakes To Avoid | i've edited 50+ essays

hope you guys enjoy these tips and info about common app essay mistakes to avoid! since ive read and edited so many essays, i thought i would share the knowledge with you guys! see you guys soon :)

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1:24 - meaningless metaphors
3:26 - direct statements
4:26 - lack of a catalyst
7:10 - focusing on stuff that's not you
8:41 - excessive use of adverbs and weird descriptions
10:09 - too much repetition

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